Wednesday, February 16, 2011

What's it Called?

Ever since I finished the first draft of my manuscript, some eight months ago, I've been searching for a title. Originally, it was The Kingery Ring Conspiracy, which I thought was okay... But after all my revisions, it didn't really fit anymore. And I was worried it was too Middle Grade. So I've spent the last few weeks calling it this or that, hoping something would stick. And I think I finally came up with something I like. So here goes... *drum roll please*


Be honest. Like it? Hate it? *bites nails* Either way, it's something to work with while I query. Let me know what you think!


  1. I am not sure I love it...i imagine myself in a bookstore looking through the shelf and it doesn't stand out...cracking mist ..or something...miss you tons bye the way!!!

  2. Not sure either. As a Chicagoan, it makes me think of "Cloudgate". Also, it's been too long since I read a bit of your draft and I'm not remembering the context. - Kathy